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 Optimisation and acceleration of program code is a crucial part in many fields. For example video games need optimisation to lower the minimum hardware requirements which allows more people to run the game, increasing sales. Another example where optimisation is important are computer simulations. For those, optimisation is even more crucial, as this allows the scientists to run more detailed simulations or get the simulation results faster. Equation learning or symbolic regression is another field that can heavily benefit from optimisation. One part of equation learning, is to evaluate the expressions generated by a search algorithm which can make up a significant portion of the runtime. This thesis is concerned with optimising the evaluation part to increase the overall performance of equation learning algorithms.
 
-The following expression $x_1 + 5 - \text{abs}(p_1) * \text{sqrt}(x_2) / 10 + 2 \char`^ x_3$ which contains simple mathematical operations as well as variables $x_n$ and parameters $p_n$ is one example that can be generated by the equation learning algorithm, Usually an equation learning algorithm generates multiple of such expressions per iteration. Out of these expressions all possibly relevant ones have to be evaluated. Additionally, multiple different values need to be inserted for all variables and parameters, drastically increasing the amount of evaluations that need to be performed.
+The following expression $5 - \text{abs}(x_1) * \text{sqrt}(x_2) / 10 + 2 \char`^ x_3$ which contains simple mathematical operations as well as variables $x_n$ and parameters $p_n$ is one example that can be generated by the equation learning algorithm, Usually an equation learning algorithm generates multiple of such expressions per iteration. Out of these expressions all possibly relevant ones have to be evaluated. Additionally, multiple different values need to be inserted for all variables and parameters, drastically increasing the amount of evaluations that need to be performed.
 
-In his Blog \textcite{sutter_free_2004} described how the free lunch is over in terms of the ever-increasing performance of hardware like the CPU. He states that to gain additional performance, developers need to start developing software for multiple cores and not just hope that on the next generation of CPUs the program magically runs faster. While this approach means more development overhead, a much greater speed-up can be achieved. However, in some cases the speed-up achieved by this is still not large enough and another approach is needed. One of these approaches is the utilisation of consumer Graphics Processing Units (GPUs) as an easy and affordable option as compared to compute clusters. Enterprise GPUs like the B200\footnote{\url{https://www.nvidia.com/de-de/data-center/dgx-b200/}} cost at least \$30000, and are only available as a full system with 8 GPUs, power delivery etc \parencite{bajwa_microsoft_2024}. Data centres specialised for artificial intelligence workloads often cost billions of dollars \parencite{bajwa_microsoft_2024}. However, despite these costs for enterprise GPUs, cheaper consumer GPUs can also deliver a great performance uplift. \textcite{michalakes_gpu_2008} have shown a noticeable speed-up when using GPUs for weather simulation. In addition to computer simulations, GPU acceleration also can be found in other places such as networking \parencite{han_packetshader_2010} or structural analysis of buildings \parencite{georgescu_gpu_2013}.
+In his Blog \textcite{sutter_free_2004} described how the free lunch is over in terms of the ever-increasing performance of hardware like the CPU. He states that to gain additional performance, developers need to start developing software for multiple cores and not just hope that on the next generation of CPUs the program magically runs faster. While this approach means more development overhead, a much greater speed-up can be achieved. However, in some cases the speed-up achieved by this is still not large enough and another approach is needed. One of these approaches is the utilisation of Graphics Processing Units (GPUs) as an easy and affordable option as compared to compute clusters. Especially when talking about performance per dollar, GPUs are very inexpensive as found by \textcite{brodtkorb_graphics_2013}. \textcite{michalakes_gpu_2008} have shown a noticeable speed-up when using GPUs for weather simulation. In addition to computer simulations, GPU acceleration also can be found in other places such as networking \parencite{han_packetshader_2010} or structural analysis of buildings \parencite{georgescu_gpu_2013}.
 
 
 %The free lunch theorem as described by \textcite{adam_no_2019} states that to gain additional performance, a developer cannot just hope for future hardware to be faster, especially on a single core.